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花 言 葉 × h a n a k o t o b a
seems that soon i'll wither away without knowing the answer
wish/no fairytale 
Mar 20 09

"where did you go?"

the sound of his own silent words hurt him
like sharp glass that dug into soft skin;
painful, numbing, searing,
driving him crazy.
funny, the pain was worse than that of cutting,
more real, more tangible, and he could swear
he saw red liquid sticking to the
small hairs of his arm.
but that's just the tears obscuring his vision.

he frowned as a teardrop formed an ugly, damp mark
on the thousandth paper he's pulled out today
(this week, this month, but who's counting?) --
it was a bad sign, the most horrible one.
among the past nine-hundred and ninety nine cranes
scattered all over his bed room,
there wasn't one that he ruined
regardless of the tears that he shed.

the two of us can never be.

aoi should've just listened to uruha's words.
Mar 20 09 (UTC)
I think the title actually fits with it!

Idk why, I felt like shivering when I read "the two of us can never be".

I liked it <3
Mar 20 09 (UTC)
Ahaha, thank you! ^^ I'm glad you liked reading it.
Mar 20 09 (UTC)
Thanks bb. 8D
Mar 22 09 (UTC)
The last two lines are utter destruction. I kind of liked it :D

But he was folding cranes to get his wish, to get Uruha, can you do that? I mean from the link I've read it said people fold cranes for recovery from illness or long life but I would personally fold them for some love purpose too.
Mar 22 09 (UTC)
Mmm, well, actually it said it grants any kind of wish. And I think it's obvious what Aoi's wish is, haha~ 8D

I never thought you'd read this since you said you didn't like angst, but thanks anyway! xD
Mar 22 09 (UTC)
I kind of try to read almost every fanfiction out there now :D
Well, not really because I really draw the line at death fics but other stuff that seem decent and if I find the name familiar I give a shot. And I have seem to have found my taste for angst after all.Been reading it more lately, because I do enjoy emotions it brings out in stories and I seem to be succeeding at not being too crushed if it doesn't end happily :)
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