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Raspberry on the Lips - Aoi/Ruki (1/1) 
Aug 07 09
ルキ・葵
Title: Raspberry on the Lips
Chapter(s): 1/1
Author: aimaitrace @ xxshamisen
Genre: Romance, slight angst
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None
Pairing: Aoi/Ruki
Disclaimer: Real people, real circumstances, fake stories.
Summary: It frustrated him that even if Aoi was supposedly as easy as a book to read, still he couldn’t read the words that hid behind those fathomless eyes.
Comments: For #118 of 15_minute_fic. I CAN STILL WRITE. ;A;






“I thought you were certain you didn’t love me.”

The words came out as bitter as the smoke that he tasted at the back of his mouth, making him grimace, more so when the words didn’t even seem to faze Aoi. Ruki snorted loudly at that, figuring he wouldn’t get any reaction from the other man anyway and decided to just stay silent, half because he was waiting for the other to answer, half because he didn’t want to be the one to beg again.

He just watched as the cloud of smoke that Aoi blew intermingled with the one he did, thinking about how his first words probably came out wrong. Even if Aoi was the one to drag him out here (not even by force but just by mere words), that didn’t mean that the older already loved Ruki as Ruki does him. Wanting to talk doesn’t equate to loving a person that way.

Another grunt came out of Ruki, waving the almost invisible particles that fogged up his sight. It frustrated him that the mixture of their breaths was probably the closest he could ever get to Aoi, not even if he was just beside him. It frustrated him that even if Aoi was supposedly as easy as a book to read, still he couldn’t read the words that hid behind those fathomless eyes.

It was frustrating to stay there, and so Ruki dropped his barely touched cigarette on the ground, stubbing it on his heel and was about to get up, not even bothering to change his words to something as simple as, ‘What did you want to talk about?’ or ‘Why did you drag me out?’ or a simpler, ‘What do you want?’ He was just far too impatient for that.

But before he could reach the door that led back to the building there was an unpleasant scent that filled his nose – the scent of cigarettes – and he was sure it didn’t come from his mouth. And before he could move any further he was being pulled back, and there was nothing for Ruki to do but to melt into Aoi’s arms.

“Things change,” were the only words that filled Ruki’s ear before he tasted the tang of smoke that didn’t seem all too bitter anymore.
Comments 
Aug 07 09 (UTC)
Ooooh, pretty! I liked the angsty part, for some reason seeing Ruki pining for Aoi was very enjoyable to read. Must be because of the heartbreak, the way you described it It frustrated him that the mixture of their breaths was probably the closest he could ever get to Aoi. And I like your setting, the cigarette smoke coming from both their mouths, and it tasting bitter for Ruki until the very end. I expected this to end up as angst, but once again you made it a happy end. You have a lovely way of doing it <3
Aug 07 09 (UTC)
We can has fluff, ninja. 8D
Aug 07 09 (UTC)
YES YOU CAN WRITE. lshdfglsdhfg dfkhsdgfklsdgfdskfdfhhsddfhs OH MY, OTP SATISFACTION.
I really enjoyed that this time it was Ruki suffering and the line Aoi was supposedly as easy as a book to read, still he couldn’t read the words that hid behind those fathomless eyes is full on, because sure you can think you have Aoi all figured out and think he is a simple guy, a lot must be going on behind his goofy face. I love Ruki being bitter and giving up on things and giving up on Aoi - and then things change. an unpleasant scent that filled his nose was fucking sexy, because Aoi was so close to him and ddddddhhhhfff oh yes.
Thank you again!
Aug 07 09 (UTC)
LOLOLOL bb I can make you keyboardsmash mmmmm.

What the hell, you see sexayy everywhere, don't you. Then again, it's Aoi. :D
Aug 07 09 (UTC)
now i wanted to make an all sophisticated comment but ninja and george already said what i found most enjoyable xDD nevertheless: AWWWWWW THANK YOU WONDERFUL :D

i liked ruki being unable to understand everyone this time when hes normally all knowing and stuff <3 and aoi being kinda mysterious and not saying anything up to the point that ruki is so frustrated that he gives up
and just the image with the mingling smoke and ruki wanting to be close to aoi but couldnt...
AND that aoi coaxed ruki outside by mere words and not force <3 that gave me a nice feeling
beautiful <3
Aug 07 09 (UTC)
Ruki has always been an all-knowing person to me, ahah~ and mysterious!Aoi is mysterious. 8D

Aug 07 09 (UTC)
ajbleurghdsd.vdf .____.

♥ I love when you write these silent fluffy but not too fluffy fics.

-jizz-
Aug 07 09 (UTC)
That seems to be what I'm good at, yes.

Aug 08 09 (UTC)
I really... really liked this. There is this... subtly that I think is just incredibly beautiful and poetic. I love the way this was written and I'm really, really happy I clicked on it. Amazing job. <3
Aug 08 09 (UTC)
Oh, thank you for your kind words~ ♥
Aug 08 09 (UTC)
i like this. :) and the last line of how things change.. that was lovely.. i can understand how Ru feel, waiting and then finally somewhat letting go
Aug 08 09 (UTC)
But he got his happy ending, ne?

Thanks for reading. :3
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